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Cathlete
I know this comes a bit late, and maybe can be used for future reference, but I wanted to list a few consistency problems I see in the catalog. I didn't have a chance to proof when you asked before, sorry!
These are purely CONSISTENCY issues (not sure if you care):
1) On KPC and L&G page under KPC + L&G premixes: "Kickbox" is constantly being switched back and forth between "Kickbox" as one word and "Kick Box" as two.
2) Same page premix #20: "drills PLUS Kickbox" has "Plus" spelled out when all other times plus is indicated with "+". (This may be occurring other areas.)
3) Same page premix #15 and #17: One has ankle weights in (paranthesis) and one does not.
4) Same page on premix #5 and #7: one pluralizes Combo and one does not, but both list 2 combos after the word (premix #6 seems accurate).
5) On BBS: Timesave page, under Timesaver #3, bullet three, biceps/core: the j and p on Jump and Pump are not capitalized but in all other parts of the list they are
This is what I ran across while browsing these two pages. I think you will add a level of professionalism if you go through to make the catalog more consistent. And there was one non consistent error I found, when looking really quickly.
1) On Low Max and twice on Imax 3 page, the narrative towards the bottom says , "The combo's are broken down with just" and "the 32-count step combo's will" and "longer than the step comob's themselves.".....combo's should not be possessive here, and should say just combos without the apostrophe.
The more I keep reading the more I see this apostrophe error...now on page 20 as well.
I am not sure if this is helpful, but I think it is worth considering if you do another print.
These are purely CONSISTENCY issues (not sure if you care):
1) On KPC and L&G page under KPC + L&G premixes: "Kickbox" is constantly being switched back and forth between "Kickbox" as one word and "Kick Box" as two.
2) Same page premix #20: "drills PLUS Kickbox" has "Plus" spelled out when all other times plus is indicated with "+". (This may be occurring other areas.)
3) Same page premix #15 and #17: One has ankle weights in (paranthesis) and one does not.
4) Same page on premix #5 and #7: one pluralizes Combo and one does not, but both list 2 combos after the word (premix #6 seems accurate).
5) On BBS: Timesave page, under Timesaver #3, bullet three, biceps/core: the j and p on Jump and Pump are not capitalized but in all other parts of the list they are
This is what I ran across while browsing these two pages. I think you will add a level of professionalism if you go through to make the catalog more consistent. And there was one non consistent error I found, when looking really quickly.
1) On Low Max and twice on Imax 3 page, the narrative towards the bottom says , "The combo's are broken down with just" and "the 32-count step combo's will" and "longer than the step comob's themselves.".....combo's should not be possessive here, and should say just combos without the apostrophe.
The more I keep reading the more I see this apostrophe error...now on page 20 as well.
I am not sure if this is helpful, but I think it is worth considering if you do another print.
