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I work in a Univerisity/hospital. Part of my job is to write stuff for the dean of the College of Medicine. This guy is an MD, PhD, MBA. His specialty and passion is obesity and diabetes, especially as they affect women. Okay. Now:
I'm working on a presentation about these topics. Part of it is to suggest solutions. In my first draft, I bring up whole foods - say people need to eat more of them. Get this.... in his written edits, he asks, "what are whole foods?"
Here's a doctor who advocates healthy eating and he doesn't know what whole foods are? Oh dear. And we wonder why obesity is such a difficult thing to overcome.
I haven't finished the second draft yet, but I will very politely explain what whole foods are.
I'm working on a presentation about these topics. Part of it is to suggest solutions. In my first draft, I bring up whole foods - say people need to eat more of them. Get this.... in his written edits, he asks, "what are whole foods?"
Here's a doctor who advocates healthy eating and he doesn't know what whole foods are? Oh dear. And we wonder why obesity is such a difficult thing to overcome.
I haven't finished the second draft yet, but I will very politely explain what whole foods are.